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Jeff's avatar

Nice twists. You keep us hanging on. Maybe I should start calling you Diana Ross (You Keep Me Hanging On).

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Awww geeez! Now I have that song stuck in my head. Big DR fan.

C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

If I were clever enough, I’d add a soundtrack. :-)

K.C. Knouse's avatar

Sounds like he is about to hit bottom. I'm looking forward to the revelation he encounters when he gets there. You have done a great job of placing the protagonist in an impossible situation, Lee. That caffeine binge paid off. :)

C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Where would we be without our stimulants?

Natalie Aguirre's avatar

I'm looking forward to seeing Part 3 after seeing how downhill Ben's life is going.

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

I have reported you to the SFPOCTFC (Society for Prevention of Cruelty to Fictional Characters). They will be arriving at your door to rescue Ben any minute now.

C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Someone needed to stop me! So glad you stepped in. However, give me a day or two to change my ways.