Well done. As a side note, when people put an image in the middle of their story just to have an image, it can be very annoying, interrupting the reading flow.
Sorry to say, but while the images you choose are nice, they are positioned within the text in a way that breaks up the reading. I always put my images at the top to avoid that. And I’m getting away from having the subscriber nag button popping up in the middle.
I'll put those images at the top. Like you, I never like the Subscribe Button in the middle, so it makes sense that other images are equally as distracting. Thanks for mentioning.
Loved the story. Quite clever. Not sure all the explanation about fear was necessary, but at my age I’ve dealt with it all, so for younger readers… oops, is that ageist? Hee!
Beautiful ending, Lee. Fear can be a powerful force if one gives into it. And it's all in our imagination. I liked that he found what he needed to solve the problem within himself. Your description of the peaceful setting he entered was captivating. Overall, a first rate tale. Thank you for sharing it.
Nice!
This is a great ending to the story. I think we can all relate to not wanting to confront our fears rather than facing them.
Some rest and restoration would do anyone some good!
This would make a great short film...
Wonderful ending and explaining a "nicemare"
We need more Nicemares!
Nice! That was unexpected and encouraging.
These days, I need an encouraging end. Thanks for reading to the end.
Don’t we all—and how!
Well done. As a side note, when people put an image in the middle of their story just to have an image, it can be very annoying, interrupting the reading flow.
So, this one didn’t add to the story, but it distracted? Maybe I should put them at the top.
Sorry to say, but while the images you choose are nice, they are positioned within the text in a way that breaks up the reading. I always put my images at the top to avoid that. And I’m getting away from having the subscriber nag button popping up in the middle.
I'll put those images at the top. Like you, I never like the Subscribe Button in the middle, so it makes sense that other images are equally as distracting. Thanks for mentioning.
Loved the story. Quite clever. Not sure all the explanation about fear was necessary, but at my age I’ve dealt with it all, so for younger readers… oops, is that ageist? Hee!
Beautiful ending, Lee. Fear can be a powerful force if one gives into it. And it's all in our imagination. I liked that he found what he needed to solve the problem within himself. Your description of the peaceful setting he entered was captivating. Overall, a first rate tale. Thank you for sharing it.