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Ned Reckoning's avatar

Love this line "My mother was an authority on ugly women", paints a picture in a single sentence.

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

I can tell you right now I like Glenna and empathize with her. (I never got along well with other women.)

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Gabi Coatsworth's avatar

Great voice...

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JQ Rose's avatar

Enjoyed the ladies and their snippy remarks. Funny, but sad too. Looking forward to learning more about Glenna and Lannie. You did a great job bringing this cast of characters to life.

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Irving A. Lerch's avatar

Oh my... My mother was a hair dresser, a long-time denizen of a shop on Lawrence Avenue in Chicago from the end of the war until her internment in a tuberculosis hospital in the '40s and '50s. I wandered the corridors, retrieving discarded "Bobby pins" and going for coffee and doughnuts for the "girls" at the local coffee shop. Their banter demarked a wonderous feminine society of humor and banter with stories of tragedy, forbearance and survival. One of her customers, a young girl called "Sheri" became my partner for, now, 62 years and counting.

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

It seems I’ve stumbled into an area with which you’re very familiar, and you have such a positive spin on the “humor and banter” of what used to be a female domain.

Congratulations on meeting someone to spend so many years and so many wonderful experiences with. A beautiful story in itself.

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Irving A. Lerch's avatar

It was a different era. These were women born at the end of WWI and raised in poverty, haunted by tragedy--some torn from their families in the Pale of Settlement, escaping revolution and pogroms. They were uneducated survivors with weltschmertz and the ability to live with humor and grace.

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