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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Nice continuation. Am anticipating the next part.

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

The end's almost ready. <Gleefully rubs hands together.>

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Gillian Foster's avatar

Hello C. Lee,

I loved this story. It's bewitching.

You may want to take a look at the artist who at first puts down her pen and later picks up her pencil to finish the drawing. Perhaps you intended her to use one or the other?

Good story!

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Thanks. I get no editing on any of these until it’s too late. :-( Stay tuned for The End!

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Sonia Dogra's avatar

I love it, Lee. I'm intrigued by this story, by what awaits Nikki. I'm also learning so much by being here, working bit by bit on my own chapter book. Thank you for this series.

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Hung Story's avatar

Are you a pantser or a plotter?(Please fill out the form)

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1b2O8za52feCsjdnrq7JBhc8BRqTDjenKeGBXtRdprq4/edit

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Natalie Aguirre's avatar

I loved this story too. It was so interesting this week.

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

I’m posting the last part next week. Thanks for sticking with me on this new adventure.

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