Heartless, Part 2
The diary entry is excellent, very ominous.
You have set up a conflict and we can hope the mother can protect her daughter.
Yikes! Gave me shivers.
What a visceral scene. Well done.
I'm enjoying your story. Can't wait to read part 3.
The diary entry is excellent, very ominous.
You have set up a conflict and we can hope the mother can protect her daughter.
Yikes! Gave me shivers.
What a visceral scene. Well done.
I'm enjoying your story. Can't wait to read part 3.