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JQ Rose's avatar

What a gripping story. I couldn't put it down I don't think I can eat breakfast!

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Sorry about the breakfast. Glad it was gripping, however.

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Gabi Coatsworth's avatar

It's always the sweetest people who write the most gruesome stuff!

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

I appreciate all compliments, Gabi!

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diedre Knight's avatar

Short stories are so satisfying, both reading and writing! This was terrifying. Thank you ;-)

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

You're welcome for the terror. :-)

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Rebecca Douglass's avatar

Ow! That’s a grim tale. Well done.

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

My alter-ego showing here.

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Jeff's avatar

Wow, that's intense! And an hour and a half before bed!

https://fromarockyhillside.com

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Sorry. I should have put a bedtime alert.

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Sue Goldberg's avatar

I am sooooo grateful that it is full llight and a sunny day. Just the same, my tummy is decidedly uncomfortable.

Thank you. I think.

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

I hate to make tummies uncomfortable, but I guess that's what horror is meant to do?

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