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H. R. Sinclair's avatar

1. Ghost! Or zombie or something.

2. Jason seem self-centered and unlikeable for me.

3. Stanley is likeable.

4. It wasn't distracting.

I agree with Natalie on the age of the mom. Unless she's had an illness that has cause major health issues, she'd still be popping around at 65.

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Tracy's avatar

I like the surprise of dear old dad popping back again as a ghost. I feel like Jason is so unlikable that I distrust his read on his mom, brother and life in general. I think his jerk image is exacerbated by his reaction to finding her out of it awhile back, and I am curious what was wrong with her and wonder if a more gradual decline would fit better with her actual age (she seems overall healthy) and let both those dorks off the hook for being callous and selfish in the reader’s eye…it is an engaging story and I definitely am interested in seeing what is going on!

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